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The world's getting smaller

That look on her face,
I'm very familiar with.
I smile to myself, as she
watches her coffee's steam.

Even the
beautiful people
daydream in
the cafes.

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Simple cafe poetry

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  • GuiltyConscience
    October 27
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    Nice. I really like how short and abrupt this is. I find it to be very effective. Great work, keep it up.


  • Sheilasbabygal4life gold member
    October 26

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    This was a very short but very well written piece of work you have written here. I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks for the read and keep up the good work.