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The Light

I was lost in the darkest void
devils dancing all around me

Wanting me to change to a being like them
But My pride kept me as I was Hurt and bleeding

Than a light appeared but was to far away
My cage held me tight but once free I would find that light

Than the light got close enough and my cage opened up
I was free and that is when I saw that the light was a beautiful angel

I spent as much time with her as I could
But I made a mistake and made her leave

I was not in a cage this time
But bound to another creature that hid behind a mask

I was lost my life goin to meet the devil himself
Yet again the angel came back and saved me

And again
I was with her

But again I did make a mistake
But a mistake was made

And again she left I thought for good for the white light disappeared
And the red light of the devils flames consumed me

But I got away from the flames but was in a new place where I had never been
And Their I got stronger to try to see my angel again

Once out I found her fast and said i am sorry
And to my delight She forgave me

And to this day
We are still together

But I still feel the heat of the devils flames
But when i do my angel flies me away and I feel better

What do you feel when you read this

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  • SheWolfNLust silver member
    November 7

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    simply beautiful, I very much enjoyed your poem and it was most certainly a pleasure to read, my favorite part was

    And to this day
    We are still together

    But I still feel the heat of the devils flames
    But when i do my angel flies me away and I feel better

    well done and I hope you have a beautiful night xoxo


  • Nickey Mouse
    October 26
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    Aww that's so cute.