The softness of the sun setting
Candid colors blending in splendor
Endearing whispered voices
Of loves harmony in tranquility
Nightfall of distant shadows
As the moonlight shines brightly above
Casting its reflections across the lake
Incredible in its picturesque beauty
A simple smile in captured
Delicate rose pedals upon satin sheets
In sweet splendor within each tender kiss
And the taste of his lips, simply delicious
Candle light fills the room
With a fresh honey scent in the air
In each caress I fill with an incredible warmth
In true love unleashed
Softness of loves music
Played in golden melodies
The innocence I see with in his eyes and soul
Leaves me deliriously in love
It was incredible that we met
I feel it was gods subtle way of answered prayers
As I feel truly blessed in the rapture
Of total happiness and delight
Eternally enlightening
The nightfall of the distant shadows
To my inner heart and soul
Oh god baby, I am so in love with you!
Author notes
You are my heart and soul Pete, How did I get so lucky?
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A contest entry
- Play On Words by Heavenly Angel.
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Comments
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Wonderful presentation you have used to accompany these words of romance. Nice HM for your efforts as well. So much easier to write words of love when one is in love, as we know from experience. Emotions show through these lines.
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whoa this is reallly beautiful and elegant
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This is beautiful. the word choices, the story telling...everything.
thanks for taking the time to enter.
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Liked your poem, word choice makes each soft loving sound, a beautiful love story. thank you.
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Ex cellent
Truely beautiful poem of love and dedication to a respoding soul.
It flows so smooth and colors the words with rich coats of wisdom.
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I like this!
Nice soft flow, could almost be a quiet silken song sung on the end of the pier placed on a sunrise over a tranquil aqua lake, where the foggy wisps of love tears waft gently on the breeze.... Nicely written.
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I'm a sucker for a beautiful love poem, and this one got me...hook, line, and sinker. The wording throughout is soft and gentle; you painted beautiful word pictures in my mind. To have someone you love this way, and to have that feeling recipericated...truly a blessing. Simply beautiful.
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thanks for readying my poem hun I love the way you took this prompt hugs Angel♥
sorry the clappies didnt stick LOL
so redid it ♥
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Very nice
Much enjoyed this piece
Thank you for sharing and for being part of this contest; good luck to you -
Wonderful
I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE this poem, I can not believe that I have the honor of commenting it first. Pete is a very lucky person to have someone like you. You seem to really be in love. Either that or you have a remarkable way with words!!
:-)
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Thank you very much for your comment,I am so happy you enjoyed my poem, if it werent for my feelings for pete Dont think I d of been able to write it, I feel truely blessed with his love and still dont know how I got so lucky, lol, xoxo
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NO, THANK YOU!!!!! :-D
He is truly a blessed man!!
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