what is
bedridden
blue ribbon-ed beauty
if not
your beige skin
beneath folds of fabric-
gruff, ripped,
inviting, poignant,
raw.
A contest entry
- twenty words; by jessica rabbit..
400 points, ended November 2, 23 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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wow
a nice short description of what it means to be ina tight situation of possible ill health..I loved teh imagery in this one...Indian poets are rousing poets I must say -
im glad you found me. because i found you in the process. BRavo!
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Haha, I'm superhappy I found you too!
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very beautiful work and so original. denim is such an overused kind of thing now but this is so unique and original, good luck!
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the adjectives here kick ass, in a sensually rough way.
thanks for sharing.
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Thank youu!
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the title is my favourite thing in the world.
the poem is just as good.
word choice that was fantastic:
bedridden
blue ribbon-ed beauty
folds of fabric-
gruff,
poignant,
raw.
that's most of the words in the poem, and they're all great.
your thought process is beautiful. -
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Thank you so much! You're a sweetheart =)
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