And we could've been harmonious,
tossing pants from the runway
as planes jumped into atmospheres,
cumulus touching wings expand...
...soaring.
Author notes
Prompt was denim, a fabirc named for the French De Nim.
From Wikipedia. Levi Strauss substituted a twilled cotton cloth from France called "serge de Nimes." The fabric later became known as denim.
A contest entry
- twenty words; by jessica rabbit..
400 points, ended November 2, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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wow mike.
its amazing how you can put so much into such few words
Beautiful !
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lovely.
thanks for entering.
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the use of the ellipsis blew me away.
the last line changed my mind about what beauty is.
this whole piece is fantastic in it's best form. -
Oooh.
I love this.
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