Your words cause me to think,
showing me sometimes how badly I stink.
Other times I see a truth laid bare,
and that my chances are better than fair.
You provide your magic spark,
That shifts my mind out of PARK,
into REVERSE or DRIVE,
by filling my mind with thoughts like a beehive.
I want to thank you again,
for giving your readers a place to begin.
I will not call it worship or aduration,
but most certainly a fascination.
For: Stirrer of Stardust
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This is a sweet dedication. It is great when you find someone or something that inspires you. Like the others I like the line: 'I want to thank you again,
for giving your readers a place to begin.' What a wonderful thing to say.
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awww..
what a nice dedication
it's a nice peice
like this stanza...
I want to thank you again,
for giving your readers a place to begin.
I will not call it worship or aduration,
but most certainly a fascination.
well done fellow poet
thanks for the share
Darky
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Nice!!!
Wow... just wow.... the words, the flow, this whole piece is simply inspiring...
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Awww, Thank You So Much! I'm quite touched.
You have an extra "h" in truth, 3rd line.
Just so you know - that piece was referring to making love - and when you bring Creation (God) into it, I'd say that's Worship. Not that I want the world to Worship me - just I happen to think there's a Man out there who already does.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yO2QE1SNbd4
Thank you again - so sweet - made me smile!
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