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...Green Moon Spell...

I caught the moon still up at five this morning,
Bold as brass and shining bright as gold.
Peeping in and glistening through my crystals,
I swear it turned a little green from cold.
It cast it's greenish spell on my cold window,
Twinkling ,sparkling in the sky on high...
I was so thankful that I got to see it,
I kissed my cat who'd woke me with his cry.
We headed back to bed and walked in moonlight...
The floor was icy cold and striped with light.
I'm sure I heard the tinkle of my crystals...
As the cold green moon winked once,
And said goodnight~~~~~~

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  • Firequeen
    November 3

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    This is great
    I like the feel of this piece
    It seems very airy
    Thank you for your entry
    Keep the ink flowing
    fire


  • Lexie - gold member
    November 3

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    really enjoyed this

    Its light hearted and soft
    thank youfor entering and good luck

  • This was a very well written piece of work you have here. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for entering and best of luck too you in the contest.