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we danced,









and you spoke me
too gentle in
                    my skin
                    to pretend
otherwise.










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prompt: beauty, in 12 words.

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  • XRainbowliciousX
    October 27

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    I love the title....it adds to the poem. Good luck in the contest. I think you did a good job.


  • Cannonsfire
    October 26

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    ...speechless and beautiful too


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 26

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    Such exquisite tenderness, engulfed by such brevity that lingers. Good luck in the contest, Poet.


  • tuesdae
    October 26
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    have fun kicking my ass in the contest

  • division
    October 26

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    i know this is only in twelve words, but this doesn't seem like twelve words. it seems like it could reach out to you, if you get what i mean.

    i really enjoyed reading this.
    great job

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