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Like Mud on Your Shoes


How I wish I had not met you
Never saw your face
Didn't have to look into those eyes
Why did I agree to have dinner with you?
Should have ignored the attraction
and fought the fire ignited within me
See, if I had never known you
Didn't look into your eyes
Said no to the dinner invite
Fought the attraction
Put out the fires
Then I never would have fallen in love
My heart would have remained whole
It wouldn't have known all the joy
and rapture of being so consumned
by one single emotion
Only to be crushed
shattered and torn into pieces
When you lit it slip
then watched it fall
right through your fingers
Becoming scattered and dirty
Lying there on the ground
Wet and cold
Stepped on and carried away
beneath the soles of your shoes
Clinging onto the last bit of hope
Only to be scrapped off
and left at your doorstep
Waiting
Just as I was before
When you still loved me

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  • Puppydog gold member
    October 29

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    SO,SO SAD!!!!

    This is so sad yet this is something which I can associate with so well. No details but let's just say many people in this world use others for their own benefit and then leave without a word.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    October 29
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    Vivid write in imagery of feeling like one was the mud on the shoes...Such a metaphor ...and powerful write!


  • Denerica silver member
    October 26

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    Nothing worse than being walked on, used, abused in so many ways, love the visual of being like the mud to someone else's shoes, what emotion. Excellent. Blessings.