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Its Broken

Time is in slow motion ,
Hating life right now I sit,
Enthusiastic!

Awkward moments grow in numbers,
Comfort zones shrinking quickly.

I'm sweating from severe dryness and
Suffering every moment of this.

Banging on what I love most,
Room temperatures rising I'm
Opening windows for circulation,
Keeping my cool when everything's hot.
Eventually the AC guy will come,
Now would be fucking great!

 

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Acrostic : a series of lines or verses in which the first, last, or other particular letters when taken in order spell out a word, phrase, etc.

" The AC Is Broken"

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  • Kendal Palmer gold member
    November 8

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    really cool! I like acrostics. Great job with this one. Thanks for sharing.
    Peace & Light,
    Kendal


  • dark1
    November 5
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    Sweet

    nice and funny


  • OnceUponAMind silver member
    October 28

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    You are so clever Nice write


  • Roseamongweeds
    October 26
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    -Laughs- great write, I love it. I can't stand any temperature above 20 degrees celcius!