Forgiveness, letting go of blame and judgment
is the light of peace in this world full of darkness
We’ve all suffered so much from our judging beliefs
their temporal repeating consequences need relief
It’s impossible to get even with judging demons
in time, their vicious attacks come reflecting back
Let me do my part to stop the ancient persistent fight
going on between my brothers and me for eons of time
Let me add to the gentle, peaceful awakening light
so upon my path to our heavenly home, it may shine
The light of forgiveness brings peace to every mind it touches
in the subconscious fabric of this multi-dimensional world
The light of forgiveness is my ticket to my eternal home
impossible to exclude any soul, lighting up my path alone
Forgiveness, letting go of blame and judgment
brings peace, joy and light to every mind it touches
In a list
A contest entry
- The Prompt... by 2lullabyhaven.
725 points, ended November 15, 2009, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Doesn't the world stand in great need of this comodity...thanks so much for your entry and good luck to you in my contest
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Excellent
What a terrific write. And so very filled with truth. The very best in the contest
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Wisdom flowing...
A sublime message through the lines of "The Light of the World" takes the reader on a tour to inner mind, visiting the four corners of awareness. Outstanding poetic-philosophic voice.
In respect and admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
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You couldn't have made it any clearer my friend, I'm not sure we fully understand forgiveness, as it is at the heart of God's love and demands great sacrifice; it is not an easy road but if we dare to take the first step the rest will surely follow, the choice is ours...to forgive even as we are forgiven
Thank you for sharing these words, they give me much to think about
John
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No brighter light,
no clearer call
than the firm words
you send out
to the world!
So directly spoken!
Well done!!!!!!!!!!
An excellent piece!
M-C
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So true Bonita, It has to start with ourselves, if we cannot be God like in our forgivness, then where will it begin
well done
David
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THIS WRITE CREATES ENERGY
VIBRANT AND SINCERE!!!!
if we just create this energy
stand aside from our vain superficial thought and see them
I say for now those who do, keep the light going until it becomes contagious
so you my friend write on...
sharing what needs to be shared
fueled by love and selflessness
it quite evident in your writes
well done Bonita
God bless you my friend...
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