Amidst the darkest night you weep
with hidden shadows, buried deep
where visions shatter, voids flood
and eyes cry, raining blood.
Inflamed, ideas wrap and bind
burning in an abandoned mind
thoughts littered with dreams of old
desperate sobs uncontrolled.
Corruption blights this rotting soul
whose servile heart the devil stole
no deliverance or salvation
all that remains, is eternal damnation.
Author notes
Prompt 2
http://his--butterfly.deviantart.com/art/Echoing-Sadness-141133680
I hope I showed you what you can't see 
Been so long since I wrote anything...
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie!!! Are You Bored? Need Something to Do? by Sweet Impatience.
1200 points, ended November 12, 14 entries
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Comments
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sure you haven't written in awhile... lol
First of all it's very dark, it rhymes, it's smooth and just rolls off the tongue.. yes you did, you most defiently showed me something I didn't see . that's the beauty of poetry. Each of us, sees something different. the imagery is vividly amazing, and just plain out creepy.. yep yep.. I just noticed your bg.. as I was typing, thought that I was seeing things, I guess I wasn't . I think that you should more often.. that's what I think.. lol
Superb writing.
Good luck
Kat
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Oh yeah!!! Back to your best here hunny! Smooth flow and deep thoughts that I think work just perfectly for that picture.
This felt like the return of the desolate writing that you do so amazingly! Yes Yes Yes!! Soooo happy to see you writing!!
♥
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oooohhhhh yea, that is just what i needed, lol, i just knew it wouldn't be long before you wrote another good one, *takes the words puts them in an iv and connects it to his veins* just what i needed, thanks, keep it flowing
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ohhhh my Lord this is Big!!! Ba Da Bing Big!
wow these words chilled me to the bone!!
cause they felt so true !! you are TOPS !!!
Love and blessings
Rend
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