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My Life Angelica~Acrostic

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My friends call me an earth angel
Young at heart they always tell me.

Love my angels who watch over me
Insight into seeing what lies ahead.
Friends I have on AP, so blessed do I feel
Each and everyone of them so special to me.

Australian gal born and bred I am and true blue
Now I'm a wife, mother, grandmother and grand
Got four children, seven granchildren, one grand
Each one is special, as all Nan's seem to know.
Love life, live it to the fullest, no time to waste.
I believe my life is enriched by love, unconditionally.
Come by and visit me, I'll make you welcome
Any way, this is my life, this is Angelica.

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Written April 13th, 2004

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  • Pinkypants
    November 22, 2004
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    This is truelly beautiful! I love the picture too Thank you so much for taking the time to enter An inspirational acrostic


  • friarcracker
    November 17, 2004
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    adorable poem & photo


  • angelica silver member
    November 16, 2004
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    If I ever get over your way I will do that angelica


  • Starstruck
    November 16, 2004
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    Time for me to actually return a comment, since I have to for the contest anyway More insight on our angel is certainly the truth. Such a big family..And such a cutie in the photo!! When you finally go get Chris in Aussie, come to Canada next and bring him with, would ya? Then I'll have two angels here and more beautiful poetry to read!


  • Samplette gold member
    November 8, 2004
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    You are an earth angel...all who know you are blessed by your warmth and love. I know I am. You turn tears into smiles and smiles into laughs. I have read this before, but am so happy to read it again. It reminds me of how blessed I am to know you.
    < Sam
    Edited on Nov 08, 4:58 p.m. because ''.


  • Mr Commander
    November 4, 2004
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    Cute pic Very well done! I most particularly enjoyed the ending. It was very appropriate for an acrostic and kinda tugged at the heart I really liked this, good job!


  • Sandygram
    November 3, 2004
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    BEAUTIFUL ACROSTIC

    This is wonderful. You sound alot like me. I have three children and four grandchildren. They and God are my life. This was a wonderful acrostic. Such a pleasure to read. Take care and best of luck in the contest. Sandy


  • Consciousness
    August 26, 2004
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    thats so good to hear. im gald u have so much love in your life and chose to live it to the fullest. thanks for the entry and keep up the good life.

  • kittyom
    June 17, 2004
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    AWESOME!!!!!!

    This is very clever in the way you presented it.....very nice, and very sweet....good luck to ya', and hope you win.......~~~~~~~~~~Kittyom~~~~~~~~~~


  • Wizzy Jo
    June 15, 2004
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    This is great I could never write acrostics myselfbut youve done an excellent job here. Well done I wish you the very best of look in my contest and thanks for entering
    Rowena Jo


  • Hinemoa silver member
    May 15, 2004
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    Getting to know you is a pleasure, one that I will cherish forever. I'm so glad we met and are now friends, Sally

  • angelica silver member
    May 7, 2004
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    Oh my sweet pumpkin, you have made me laugh tonight with your comments~well..I have been told I'm young at heart shuffles her feet, and I lovesya~Nan


  • Phantene
    May 7, 2004
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    oh nan ur life is SO truely blessed. as are the people who are are fortunate enough to know you. you truely touch people's souls wherever you go. trust me i know...here is a fine example-everyone knows you here on AP. you are certainly my most special friend in all the world.
    although 1 thing im not so sure about...
    "Young at heart they always tell me." thank God you dont talk nonsense though and say things like "Young i look" tehehe! I WUV YOU LOADS!


  • notmissperfect
    April 25, 2004
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    that was awesome. i admire the acrostic style because i find it really rather difficult to do. and that is kind of cool how your husbands name is bob and i had bob was here. but anyway that was a wonderful poem and thanks for entering!

    -britt


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    April 24, 2004
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    A glimpse into the life of our Angel This is beautifully done hun, I love this style of poem. My mother did one for each of us when we were born with our names down the side and it sort of stuck with me, I've done a few of these myself. You did a great job with this, it's not easy to begin each line with "certain" letters like this. Bravo!!!!!!

  • angelica silver member
    April 19, 2004
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    My sweet Sam, you are a blessing in my life also, we were destined to meet just as we both have with many on AP, so blessed we are Love you ~Joan


  • angelica silver member
    April 19, 2004
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    Thank you Rora for your wonderful comments, we must talk again soon, it's been so long my sweet.ove you~Joan


  • angelica silver member
    April 19, 2004
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    Thank you my darling Pixie for your wondreful compliments, I love you dearly.AJAA


  • SEA angel gold member
    April 19, 2004
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    Angelica Joan AP's Aussie Angel

    Yes, this is Angelica Joan the Aussie Angel of AllPoetry. Who lights up the hearts of all of us who are honored to know her right here on AP. With angel dust and prayers to light her way Angelica glows and lights up your heart if you just take time to get to know. Thank you


  • moonlitmirror
    April 19, 2004
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    This is really nice, I think that this poem was very well written. I hope you do well in the contest! You wrote this acrosstic very well, sometimes I think they're sort of hard, but you did it and made it seem like it was a breeze! Thanks for sharing, and again good luck!

    ~blessings~

    ~rora

  • Samplette gold member
    April 18, 2004
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    This is so beautiful and so you....
    You are a woman that shines in many colors, and gives in many ways. I am so happy to have met you and blessed to have you in my life. You are my angel....love you!!
    sam

  • angelica silver member
    April 18, 2004
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    Thank you my dearest friend Pauline, I'm so glad we met and spend many outings together. Love you my friend~Joan


  • Roseleaf
    April 17, 2004
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    brilliant!!

    beautifully done and so true lovely background cute picture too
    all the best in the contest

  • angelica silver member
    April 17, 2004
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    Thank you Alex, I was never always like this, there was a time I didn't like who I was. But I turned my life around and became ME the person I am today who is very happy with her life. Love to you my friend~Joan


  • HopesAreLies
    April 16, 2004
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    you are an earth angel this is a good peice. you have a wonderful life filled with love

    love Alex


  • angelica silver member
    April 16, 2004
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    Thank you Bill, for your kind words,you are a great person also~Love Joan


  • sidewinder silver member
    April 16, 2004
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    thy words are spoken with truth...
    where one needs comfort...you find a way to light a smile in one's heart....thank you!
    I did enjoy this very much!
    Keep penning on one stroke at a time!
    Bill

  • angelica silver member
    April 15, 2004
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    My sweet darling Renee, I love you soooo much, I hope the break did you good. You and I are connected very strongly.Just take care of yourself, we'll talk soon my friend.Love you~Joan


  • poetryality silver member
    April 15, 2004
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    You are the most beauiful angel and friend I have ever encountered on earth, and what you write of yourself is TRUTH! May the angels here at AP and in the Heavens always be your greatest delight and comfort. I love you like a sister my friend and I always will. Good luck in this contest, this is worthy of a prize and I know there will be many jewels in your crown when you get to Heaven.

    Always Loving YOU,
    Renee


  • Nelak
    April 13, 2004
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    Beautifully written! Love you.

    Joan,

    Oh such a beautiful write. You are admired by many, loved by many and heal many. One of those people who you uniquely touch and care is me! You are so beautiful, and mean the world to me! Yes, you do!!! Truly uplifting and inspirational words. Love you always and forever.

    GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST!!!!

    Writing is good for the heart and soul.

    Sincerely,



    Nelak

    BRAVO, JOAN!!!!!!!!

    p.s. love the picture (as always) and the background!)


  • Kristina
    April 13, 2004
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    Well done!

    Joan, great poem you have written here. You are such a wonderful person and your poem is wonderful. Always live life to its fullest, just as you meantioned. The best of luck to you in the contest. Keep it up and never stop writing.

    May the colours of the rainbow follow you always.

    Smiles always,
    Kristina

  • angelica silver member
    April 13, 2004
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    Thank you C G My dear friend for commenting on my poem and your beautiful words you have added.Love to you always~Joan


  • ceegeeess
    April 13, 2004
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    secellent

    Angels on earth rare! evangelists too!
    stranger you are not, as an angel!
    An evangelist of love and essence of it!
    Bond of love you undersatand and
    Make all understand 'love is God'!
    This is not only your personal story
    but the essence of angel woman's
    Achievements in life blessing so many!
    Very nice poetic piece of love and life!

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