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Pigs will fly before I love you

I could kid you honney and say 'I love you'
Say 'suger baby I tell you it's true!'
That I honest truely 'feel cold and blue'
Be down on my hands and need at a loss of what to do.

But I'd be telling you that 'pigs can fly'
Far before 'I love you' preched my lips
Like you would never teach to me on times I made you cry,
Having yeilded words and kicks with a non-existant whip.

I could kid myself and say 'I don't miss you'
Say 'the skies are raining tears for you I don't need to any more'
That I'm fine without you it's just love flu
That it's raindrops leaking from beneath my eyes postwar.

But I'd be telling myself a lie 'because it's true I can't deny'
I'm far from happy that you've left me 'watch the skies,'
That you stole my heart and wore it on your sleeve 'without you i'll die'
'pigs can fly...'

I'll tell you the truth while porkers twirl above
You'll see pigs fly it's no longer impossible,
Hopping that you'll feel my love
'When impossible becomes possible'

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When impossible becomes possible

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  • Palas Kumar Ray
    November 15
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    This is unique.We are often undone to our heart's little wishes.

    "But I'd be telling myself a lie 'because it's true I can't deny'
    I'm far from happy that you've left me 'watch the skies,'
    That you stole my heart and wore it on your sleeve 'without you i'll die'
    'pigs can fly...'"

    Sound very honest.You have beautifully brought out the consequences of love.


  • Ken-Maverick
    November 7

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    JUDGED!

    I very nice take on the prompt poet,
    you describe the impossibilities of possiblities well, so well done.
    Thanks for entering and all the best to you in the contest.

    Ken