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Portrait of the Artist as a Poet Gone Mad

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Is this the feel-
ing of a shatter-
ed mirror?

Smashed and
cracked and
hammered and
poked and
prodded and
all of the things I can-
not begin to describe-

I'm running in circles again.
Chasing my own goddamned tail,
again.

Who would've thought that
blank lines could become
such a sinister sight
in the eyes of the night?

Who could even begin
to possibly see...

How the shattered glass
has always been me?

And how many times will I cut myself here?
Picking up the pieces,
all those shining
fucking pieces...

Glinting in the moonlight like gold,
these words...

How many times must I lose?
No longer a mirror,
they're simply a ghost,
the silence of all that I've
wanted to say.

O, how many times will I call you my love!
Before all of these scars
will drive me away?

O, How many times will I write down these words!
Until I realize there's nothing to say?

This is the portrait of the poet gone mad,
this is the light of his heart:

This is the pound of the flesh he has cut,
all in the name of some devilish art.

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And somehow, I cannot help but fear:
That the eyes of the outsiders
are watching me again...

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  • This was good. It was moving in some parts. It was very well written this had a good flow too it. Thanks for enteirng and best of luck too you in the contest.


  • requiempoet gold member
    October 26

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    Parts of this poem could have been written by me...sometimes do you ever stare and the mirror and just wonder?

    I love it.

    And somehow, I cannot help but fear:
    That the eyes of the outsiders
    are watching me again...