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Give Whats Left of my Heart.

Seems like
my dreams like
to end in a hurry,
undone and outrun,
my eyes red and blury,
I feel like I'm racing,
I'm outdone,
they leave me to scury,
I try though,
to hury,
but life just runs faster
my mind screams in its disaster,
I could swear I was alone again,
but you came and saved me,
held me,
wanted me,
and finally,
when I felt gone,
felt faded,
you came back
and gave me hope,
I owe you,
I know I do,
just wait a while
even though I don't know if i want to,
if I'm ready
but I guess I'll have to be,
because I want to tell you the truth,
I wanna give my heart to you.

Author notes

I wrote this one I think mostly just after I was talking to the person that I love (o.o) even though he doesnt really know it yet, I know he loves me we just--- haven't said it on a mutual level yet I guess lol. But yeah, so theres that.

I just kind of think that even though what I've been through seems like shit shoe to most people, I think it's more what ive done to myself and what I'll admit Ive done to myself so that other people wouldnt notice me lol. (stupid I know but w/e) anyway, i gues this is kind of... about that, maybe. I don't know. I never know lol.

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  • glamour glitch.
    October 28
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    I pick the third choice!
    Woohoo!
    Here's three clappies because I love jew and the honesty in this piece!
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    ~Kaity. ♥