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One Peak

I watched the budding flower unfold
and saw that I had found its gold
By single moments we are bound
like sun to flower, root to ground

A glistening gift each moment passed
from first beheld until the last
A second second, time has spun
Each flow does come but then is done

-Eddy



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  • Night Hope gold member
    October 26

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    It's beautiful, Scribe. You always pen such prettiness for our eyes to inhale, Eddy.


  • Stormraven
    October 26

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    Mmmm

    Liked this one allot Read it a few times to let it sink in . Coffee , need more coffee Storm


  • donnz
    October 26

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    Excellent

    Time / as the great equalizer
    is second to none