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- contrast

At night, the leaves fall down gracefully just like in the day but they look different.

I always wondered why she put on so much makeup,  when she had no scars. Not even a pimple. I looked in frustration as she showed me her $500 dollar make up collection and I  went back home to nothing.

At night I would cuddle up with my lover and would feel as if I was a Goddess. Chocolate would melt in just a few seconds and after that, I was in Heaven.

She was in bed all alone that same evening and felt ugly - while he fucked someone else. The next day, she put on her makeup again with pretty ribbons.

Everyone thought she was beautiful but him -

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prompt - The girl with ribbons doesn't dance anymore

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  • Wow, this is gorgeous

    the last line really packs a punch ^^
    Thank you for entering,
    Claire x


  • wave1080
    October 26
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    Awww

    Lovely write dear