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Silence

When I first saw it, my heart beat so fast.
I don't know if I'm the one who did it in the past.
Sitting here in a crowded room, waiting for some confirmation
Can it be me?

I suddenly went like time travelling
Emotions running were somewhat deafening.
I don't know what am I gonna do
Can it be me?

Is this the turning point I've been waiting for? hope it's not..
'Coz I still lack everything that I've got.
Please..please.. I can't help but..
Can it be me?

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