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It was over before it even started

you called it 'just being [overly] friendly' && as always, I played along.

"I
  love
        you"
              is on the tip of my tongue, but i won't get ahead of myself.
while were being honest dear, loves becoming over-rated and if this ended now you'd be just another boy that filled my time (and the pages of my notebook) for another chapter in my life.

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Not so sure about the title, might end up changing it.

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  • Br0kEn WiNgS
    October 26

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    Wow i really like this i feel i can really relate to this. This was really good i think that whoever reads this is gonna get something different and be reminded of a personal experience. For the title i think maybe... It was over before it even started... might work better or not idk.


    • DropDeadMadi
      October 26
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      Thanks!
      I really like the title idea! I think I'm going to use it!