Okay its time to sleep
you have to
please
sleep
dont cut
anymore for tonight
haven't you done
enough already
dont hurt
yourself anymore at
least for
now please
I know
It's hard to sleep now
after what he did but
you know you
need
to. . .
how
long
has it
been?
too long since you
slept. so sleep
now
don't smoke
more
your
high enough
for tonight okay
careful my darling
flashbacks are
scary
but cutting
wont
help
stop
please god no
deeper oh it
won't help
you've been
through enough
tonight dont hold
back the tears
that's it
it's okay
cry let
it out
there
you go
good..
no more cutting for
tonight please be careful
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Comments
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Very nice form! I'm impressed.
Especially in the "U", there was a lot of desperation, and I could really feel every plea with you.
Thanks so much for entering & Take care,
K-J -
Beatiful
That was soo good, relatable, and deep! It was a great poem and I cant wait to read more of your work! -
wonderful
Kool poem =), lovely format, keep up the good wring
byyyyyyye k
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Wow this is awesome and I love the layout, very imaginative.
This is poem reads well and I love the way that when I read it in some areas the tempo speeds up/ slows down.
For instance:
haven't you done
enough already
dont hurt
yourself anymore at <----- All lines abouve this area are fast
least for <------- Whilst here you appear to slow down
now please
Well I'm going to have to give this poem the thumbs up
so well done.
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