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Fragile Spheres

Fragile spheres
they appear
those things that guard my heart
from you; the one I fear

Soapy, teary
floaters weary;
tired of the way you play
organ strings; music eery

Fragile spheres
they simply appear
those things that guard my heart
from you; the one I fear

No more shall I hide
with love denied
unbreakable now I shall be
invincible to your lies

Fragile spheres
they only appeared
those things that guard my heart
from you; the one I feared

Author notes

prompt: unbreakable bubbles

idea: there once was a fragile bubble guarding my heart from falling in love, but now it is like steel; unburstable. I no longer fall like I used to

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  • Kathraina silver member
    October 28

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    oh! i really love your concept here! fantastic take on the prompt, i really love seeing the thought you put into this!


    bravo and thank you for entering



    ♥ kate