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Days

Day and day gone by,
I have made the final sacrifice.
Now each moment hearing how you died,
Always playing the memories in my mind.

I will always know this pain,
My regret beats me again and again.
I will embrace the ending.

Each night is filled with hell.
Secretly my heart tears me eternally apart,
Maybe that's just as well.

Because if you bring the jury I'm guilty I signed the waver on your life.
Maybe that's for the best.
I will no longer need this strife.

Forever I will be alone, listening to your silent scream,
Echoing the beating of your heart.
I'm the only one who wakes up knowing this life is worse than death.
I don't understand how anyone could question this hell.
Day after day.

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  • after "died" in the third line, replace the period with a comma
    other than that, VERY good write.

    <3 emily


  • eraced
    October 29
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    nicely done. keep writing.


  • CareBearKilla
    October 27
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    Great Job! It was very sad, and very honest, but it was also beautiful.
    Great write!
    Good Luck!