Day and day gone by,
I have made the final sacrifice.
Now each moment hearing how you died,
Always playing the memories in my mind.
I will always know this pain,
My regret beats me again and again.
I will embrace the ending.
Each night is filled with hell.
Secretly my heart tears me eternally apart,
Maybe that's just as well.
Because if you bring the jury I'm guilty I signed the waver on your life.
Maybe that's for the best.
I will no longer need this strife.
Forever I will be alone, listening to your silent scream,
Echoing the beating of your heart.
I'm the only one who wakes up knowing this life is worse than death.
I don't understand how anyone could question this hell.
Day after day.
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Comments
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after "died" in the third line, replace the period with a comma
other than that, VERY good write.
<3 emily -
nicely done. keep writing.
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Great Job! It was very sad, and very honest, but it was also beautiful.
Great write!
Good Luck!



