swallowing horse sized pills that help me swallow the shit of the grind
pharmaceutical balance to counter all the years of contra
and daisy chains of rainbow mantras
trips and falls
through mysterious halls
rabbit holes
and looking glass portals on the horizon's thin line
gluttonous head bobs and sways
as rats nibble on fear flavored chunks of bleu cheese
and the catepillars still crawl across the door face asking Why?
Did it make ya think and/or feel?
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Now why do i think your writing about society and its influence on us all when i read this an excellent write dear poet
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made me feel, and made me think. You're job is done. winks.
Love the caterpillar line.
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if i didn't know any better i think i just walked through some old kind of nut house or something like that , and i liked it, keep it flowing
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Classic! That first line is fantastic and then you just roll from there! I also love the line... 'as rats nibble on fear flavored chunks of bleu cheese'!
Great job!
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Now I know Alice was a streetkid and yo is telling here real story an excellent expose dear poet
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what a journey...
vivid descriptions that etch themselves into the mind. The closest I ever got to contra was back in the good ol' NES days. I blew many a cartridge back then, but fought very few battles.lol I think matras is mantras unless your speaking in Norse dialect. Then that has a whole new meaning for me. So many things I don't know
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