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Don't Sneak Up on Me, Then Again, Please Do

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Sneaking behind me and cupping my breasts
the warmth of your breath across the neckline
Pressing hard against my skin your growing
as your fingertips quickly trace my pantyline

Heat is rising as you drop to your knees
and bring down my panties with your teeth
Scent of arousal has reached a new peak
and moans of pleasure escape sultry lips

Your tongue dancing circles around my hard clit
as sweet nectar starts flowing between luscious thighs
Laying me back upon the sheets and worn pillows
my hand wraps firmly around your swollen shaft

Working my hands up and down in heated motion
your hands parted the valley of passion
Sliding up and then down, then sinking two in
my mound sweetly took you in

Beads of commitment slid down your chest
and I begged for you to enter the sea of desire
Heavy thrusts did startle the waves of the waters
as the shore was beaten with intimate rage

Gripping the sheets as you gave all to me
my body accepting the pleasures of your passion
Warmth filled me up and I trembled beneath you
as ecstasy claimed the air that we breathe

Body collapses and rests tenderly on mine
I kissed the perspiration of lust off your hair
Legs entwining and we are joined hip to hip
as loving couldn't get, much better than this

Author notes

Thoughts...Trying to forget the day...

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  • John Faulkner gold member
    November 1

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    Sensuality in its purest form...Every pulsating sentence acquires the next, and on and on..Erotica to be seduced with an open mind..Imagery is amazing..tantalizing..appealing...vivid.Shakes the soul of a man to a point of release..Words of ultimate pleasure..intense.I enjoy your style..I must read more..congrats, hun


    John


  • JohnnyD gold member
    October 26

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    "forget the day? " Heck, that damn near makes me forget everything save for this write! A richly sensual enshrinement of lust, passion and romance in one lovely package. (Which, of course, is "you"! )

    love it, love you, perfection of life.

    Len

  • Hockeygal4life
    October 26

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    WOW

    WOW!! That wasw really awesome writing and how you describe the pic with the first verse, amazing!! I dont know why but for some odd reason I got a chill right down my spine from reading it! Iknow you're helping on my one poem but take ur time on that, no presure hun! have a good one!


  • Sector-Hunter silver member
    October 26

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    This is a very hot way to forget your day. I have had times were my mind has moved to thoughts like this when I have had a long day. This had me very worked up I loved each word. Wonderful work as always SH

  • can't find the words at the moment but i will just give you one that comes close to what i am trying to find, beautiful, keep it flowing


  • Poetic-Theorem gold member
    October 26

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    "loving couldn't get, much better than this"
    Very well stated..nice hot sensual piece
    and what better way to forget the day
    Very well written hun
    Love
    David


  • cricketjeff gold member
    October 26

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    Passionate and sensual heated and heating

    Enough to make anyone forget anything

    Love it

    Love

    Jeff


  • Venugopal gold member
    October 26
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    I love you dearly for this poem. Accept my warm kisses


  • Griswold gold member
    October 25

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    The only way it could get any better baby is for real. Soon enough baby, soon enough. Fantasy is all well and good, but reality is the Bomb!!! Actions speak louder than words I know. The time will come. I love you... Scott

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