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Two Weeks

Two weeks of commuting to the wild was all it took.
Usually like a hermit I shy away.
This time I took a leap into the outside and look what it gave me.

Six weeks of sickness and fever,
My swine episode.
I called the doctor and got the pills.

They forgot to mention in the media the blood and the chills.
It poured from my nose for three days.
Such a leper I am and still I infected people, but then at least we can all bleed together.
I have to say dont worry now because I am better.

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  • CelticQueen
    November 3

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    Six weeks? Bleeding? Holy cow! And I thought I had it bad! I'm glad you're feeling better.

    As for the poem, I don't understand the first stanza at all. Perhaps you could make the meaning there clearer.

    Thanks for entering my contest. cq


  • eraced
    October 29
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    I like that babes, it's jokes. I know someone who got fuckin qurintined over it. It was common flu from reading festival.