I see you,
And you see me.
I wave and you walk away.
You get in your car and drive.
Confused,
I run after you.
Why are you leaving?
As you drive out of the lot,
I stop and stare.
Why?
I see break lights as a sharp pain surges through my body.
Car tiers squeal,
Horns blare,
Darkness overcomes me as I hit the ground.
I wake to find myself in a white room.
Your sitting next to me.
I cant breath,
I cant speak.
I reach out for you.
You start to take my hand,
Then turn a way.
No tears fall from your brown eyes as you walk out of the room,
The sad note of death follows.
What did you think?
Comments
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Well written.
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This is very sad piece

Many raw emotions pours from this piece
I hope that writing help to ease your pains
People can be very cruel..sometimes the little thinks like "silence" and walking away cuts deeper than other cruelties..
Take care
David




