swirling
in soft breezes,
leaves alight their anchors
to splatter bare walkways in bright
rainbows
Author notes
It has been such a long time since I have written a decent cinquain. Many thanks for holding this contest as few have inspired me thus.
Autumn is such a beautiful season.
The background was created using a painting by Jonathan Earl Bowser.
In a list
A contest entry
- Cinquaintly Fall by azure85.
1100 points, ended November 7, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very bold ideas and imagery here, it takes the ordinary and seems to hold it up so that we see the significance, very well done...PK
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A very beautiful cinquain that speaks to the autumn season very well. The scene is a lovely one in your words, and you can see the floating colors of the time in each line, thank you so much.
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beautiful
now that i know you saw all those leaves outside, you can get your ass out there and sweep them all up and when you're finished, go do the back yard! LMAO Good luck in the contest Honey, Hugs~ Cuddles -
so good to see you back here with a cinquain and one as lovely, soft and colourful as this one...but of course, you know how to write a cinquain. wonderful work...write more
~ Nicolette
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Good....
.... entry I think it will do well very descriptive withing the guideline of the form masterfully penned!
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