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modern society


the young are getting older
in a mental state more
than physical these days.

i wonder sometimes
if they realize what life
was like without
T.V.

"pop culture" is the
term most relevant to our
daily lives.

how does that make sense?

i'm not complaining but
my life is filled with
sharp notes

and

people cussing
just to get a point across
to someone that already knew.

we don't live forever
but sometimes



































we worry too much that we won't.

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  • passionalities
    October 26
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    this is amazing. i really liked it. <3