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Love Came Walking In

We set a place to meet.
I was the first one there.
I sat with a friend and waited.
Nearly pulling out my hair.

I wondered what you'd be like.
I wondered what I'd say.
I hoped I wouldn't say something stupid.
I hoped I wouldn't scare you away.

But you really seemed to like me.
And I fell for you fast.
I could feel that this was meant to be.
I could feel that this would last.

That was night it all began.
The night love came walking in.
We'll spend our lives together.
Love is a game we'll win.





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  • Topaze
    November 8
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    A lovely piece, thank you for this fine entry.


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    October 25
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    beautiful!! love in full bloom! loves it!
    ~Rend

  • This was a very good piece of work you have written here. This made me think of my wife, I am so in love with her and she means the world too me. I am sure that she knows it too. This was a very well written piece. Keep up the good work.