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...

life can be summed up
in three little dots
(...)

because when people
only appreciate
the biggest

it's nice to know
these ...
still belong.

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  • darkscorpia
    October 27
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    I think its a nice, short poem that gives meaning to something people might not normally think about.


  • tuesdae
    October 26
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    ellipses are fun.
    i liked this, rin.

  • unclebirdman
    October 26
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    the biggest?

    i like the simplicity, but what is "the biggist"?