THE RED APPLE
There in a tree you can see
The shiny red apple
Have a taste
Having a rosy red
Enjoy the apple
Embrace the wonder
Red apple
Red apple
Enjoy the taste
Every one eats them with delight
Delicious it is
Delight in it
An apple a day keeps the doctor away
A joy it gives
People take bite of them
People eat the apples
Long ago the tree began
Lovely they are
Eat an apple a day
Enjoy its delight
Allen Hollandsworth
©10/25/09
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Did for school time Serenity's pre school word of the day
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THE RED APPLE
There in a tree you can see
The shiny (read) apple
it should be red being you dont use full stentes and the fact that i have seened better poems from you i give this a C- keep up the great work -
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ok glad like
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This is a great POEM.
Miss. Snow -
you need to write books for preschoolers!
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smiles thanks Ms. Rose
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