It is given with ease, when you try to please,
the ones who carry the flame,
trying so hard, to become a bard,
linking lines to make true the claim.
But proceeding with strength, you go the whole length,
to produce what will be understood,
then show that with will, you can awaken the quill,
and place a write in the place that it should.
Now if others do try, and answer the cry,
they can see that they can do it too,
but the muse must be there, to show that she’ll care,
and the end results will come right on through.
So heat up your ink, and click on the link
bring a write to the table to share,
We’ll comment it true, and not leave you blue,
showing all in the group that we care.
A contest entry
- Big Point Contest Challenge for a Poetic Form by Haiku-bless-you.
2100 points, ended November 16, 21 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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You have crafted a wonderfully tight and coherrent poem that all poets should be able to relate to. The form is right on and the rhythm and meter flow like honey. Well done dear poet.
write On!
Dennis
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Bravo. You have weaved a wonderful statement of truth into this spot on to the form Triquatrain. Your rhymes connected and made total sense and rolled off my tongue with ease as I read it out loud. Rhythm and flow was perfection. I loved it.
Thank you so much for entering the contest and sharing your talent.
Bill
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Wonderfully penned!
I love your theme!
Thanks for sharing your talent. Best wishes in the contest and always!
Write on and on!
and
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Written only as a 'True Writer' can pen---Excellent!
Well Done & Best of Luck in the contest!
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AWWWWW
My sweet master poet
your dancing guill is magical indeed and the thoughts that do flow simply sing..i feel you have met this wee challenge and rightly comfortably won it
sweetheart pure magic and i love it! nemehotatse na cougar always and a day
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Encouraging to keep writing and just a wonderful usage of words and sentences composed here. Excellent. Blessings.
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Dear brother...So you were up to this challenge... and I commend you for it, as my mind at this time is too weary for all the rules...I have read your poem tonight, and I will read it again tomorrow so I can just fathom easier all your trouble for writing it! sis
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I love this
I feel this should be on everones page here o allpoetry for indeed we all have such uniqueness to our work and it will make others feel our inner feelings some will cry some will laugh and some may not understand it at all but to be brave and present it forward will bring much brighter days .Great piece here
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