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depression

i'm having trouble
making words rearrange
into the order i need
to bring along change
and make htis stop
this way i suddenly feel
i've stopped trying
to pull out any appeal
and if i sit, i find
that i wish i could care
and make something become
from this vicious pair
but for now im hopeless
to my own cause
and my heart is becoming
a long awkward pause

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