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the Sensitive Few





And so I wander once again into the nebulous causeway
        of words, trying to decipher the hidden truths
        of those who have gone before.
The Orient, the Occident, the wild fury
        of Rimbaudian streets
        where the initial word slingers rose up
        out of the non restrictive ashes and burned in the fire
        of the seer.
Tonight, I pay homage
        to those torch bearers of infallible wisdom,
        those sensitive few
        who have resonated softly
        inside the wind
        of lucidity.
For they are he who has sat beneath
        the pastelled canvas of femininity,
        warm in the moisture
        of a moon blessed caress
        and who blinks his eye
        and sees a verdant cathedral of beauty
        chanting in the compassionate forest
        of his memory.
She who swaddles the simple headed dragon
        of menial drudgery,
        enfolds the limp limbs of the heart wounded
        and bathes their buckled bodies
        in the pure water of an April rain.
He who embraces the velvet petals
        of a philosophical lotus,
        who realizes that the essence of such
        a vibrant display of colour
        is contained deep down in the mud
        at the bottom of the pond where the roots take hold.
She who anoints her hair with a Himalayan rose,
        who purifies the ashes of warfare
        in a continuation of poetic phrases
        brought forward from the outer edges of Elysium
        and who faces the historical storm head on,
        embracing a lantern of forgiveness.
He who steps unafraid
        into the collosseum of politicians
        and fences of barbed wire,
        who shouts his truth into the undergarments of misery
        and mediocrity
        and although sometimes beaten down,
        continues in his shouting.
She who trembles beside the fragile asylum,
        keeping her eyes, her mind focused
        and blessing the beloved infidels
        who wander the desolate halls
        intoning invocations of haunting clarity.
He who sings the hymn of spiritual revolution,
        whose pages secrete sacred blood
        from a treatise of equality world wide
        and who understands
        the many nuances of delicate prose
        devoid of hypocrisy.
She who dresses in saffron garments
        and with one million arms
        coddles the disenfranchised and the downtrodden
        to her aching breast
        where they are soothed by the faint,
        but tender echo of her heart.
He who shatters the windows in the White House,
      Buckingham Palace and the Kremlin of the mind,
      who pins a linguistic tail
        on the proverbial jackass of the planet
        and causes it to lie down in a field
        of benevolent daisies.
She who bears the mystical fruit
        from a garden of deep longing,
      who reveals the mystery of midnight
        and from the curve of her nipple
        allows the milk of the creative spirit to pour down
        from the heavens.
For he is a monk, a magi, a poet and a prophet
        of no fixed address
        and she is a nun, a sibyl, a priestess and divine oracle,
        blissful in the aromatic seeds of poetics.
Together, these sensitive few
        balance upon the pillow of our dreams
        and whisper the soul’s yearning vernacular
        into our yawning and sleeping ears.



















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  • Andre ben-YEHU
    November 7

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    Excellent...



    On the prairies of truth seraphic musician plays the notes of awareness, and with mellifluous voice, "the Sensitive Few" shows the vision of the One that poetizes life, and plays the piano of creative wonders.

    I have learned from the lines of "the Sensitive Few". A true ontological tour through the valley of knowledge and historical

    In respect and admiration

    Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU


  • just rob gold member
    October 27
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    yes, yes, yes...


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    October 26

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    I am sitting here stunned....absolutely brillant...and exquisite....

    wow!
    It fed my weary heart...as it is too easy in this world to give up
    and to live a blind and selfish life...

    wow!
    this is ABSOLUTELY STUNNING!
    ears/Kathleen/Seattle

    YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL!


  • EyeRaven
    October 26

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    blessful

    and powerful imagery ..
    though most of the idea was understood, i failed to recocgnize some of the images and metaphors
    this in no way is to be considered a con, i am merely stating my unregretful incompetence to contain all of the meanings meant to be.

    with due respect.


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 25

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    And tonight, dear Scribe, we all pay homage to you. Absolutely stunning work, Marc. Sheer f'n brilliance, my dear Friend. Off to the feature box you go, Maestro.



  • Amera gold member
    October 25

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    I find this poem to be totally captivating as I do most of your work. Line after line I find myself enthralled with the originality that flows from your pen. I find myself using your work to inspire me for my own poetry. I see your thought process as being introspective with a light hearted view of the world around you and for that reason your poetry is a joy to read and agree with or disagree as the case may be at times. Bravo and please accept the three allotted clappies!

    Love,
    Amera

  • Climbing2nothing
    October 25

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    awww wow, an so much homage to these and thee from the circular hand in hand of the planets...

    w a packet of fine turkish coffee
    -Jas

  • Rowan gold member
    October 25

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    As I wipe away tears...
    fuck. There's so much I'd like to say, but it's like wishing in one hand, and loose shat in the other... hon. I've told you often that, if I grow up, I want to write like you. These words roll, reasonate, and exist because of you. One of your finest.
    sigh.
    Always, Kathleen

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