Im inside my home,
all alone.
There is no light,
Theres no one in sight
But I know there is something there.
I am scared,
but im trying to go to bed...
I suddenly remember, I forgot to lock my door.
Im close to the floor.
suddenly I hear a noise,
I know its a voice.
I can't quite place what its saying.
Im not playing
One of my friends might have made the noise,
But I only have few...
He is standing over me,
thats all I see
And then it goes black.
Im dead.
Author notes
Is it scary?
A contest entry
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Yep! Creepy factor is at a high here!! Just another reason while I will be sleeping with the lights on!! Thanks for your eerie entry!!
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YES
scary indeed...your have given us much to see through your words and the emotions that they bring...just wish you werent dead tho...was just getting to know you
happy halloween love
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Thanx... You made me feel better, and you added humor to it!
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It was good, and well written, better than some of ur other work. It wasn't scary, however.
Keep up the good work, ur improving a lot actually.
Good Job.
P.S. Ur hella cool! -
Creepy, the being alone in a dark house is very creepy especially when you hear noises. Great job.
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fine work pup..u r improving well...i m happy for u...i didnt feel it was scary though....keep writing and posting
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Hey, Gauravrulz, You changed your pic again, Big Bro!
It ish Sexxy!!! 
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:))
Never mind...I changed it
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*poop*
I didn't know that this background was spiderman until i submitted my poem...
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