It feels like my heart,
but I know it's my soul.
Her razor has cut.
Her arm is our love
as it bleeds to the bathroom floor.
The pain in my chest.
She rips you away.
Our soul being split.
My hear being ripped.
I can never tell which hurts me more.
Losing my other half?
Or being choked by a
swelling heart.
The water in my eyes
drown out your face,
i'm screaming for
my vision to return.
Your embrace holds me tight,
your sleeve soaking in
my tears.
i've spilled my own blood for you
as many times as because of you.
And because of her blood,
my pain is worse than ever.
I finally had you.
You finally had me.
And now we are losing us,
for an enemy's
blood-spill?
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Thank you for your entry and good luck in my contest, Josie
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I finally had you.
You finally had me.
And now we are losing us,
Ohhh intense . Me likkie.
I hate it when other people have such a hold over your emotions.
Good luck in my hack job of a contest,
Louise. -
aw its nice
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dark and delicious
i have another half that ripps at me as well me and are alike in so many ways that its almost unreal btw i love everything ive read so far -
I like it! Lots of imagery and it is well-written. Nice!
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