P rancing around the evening looking for the one
A llowing the moonlight to kiss soft silken skin
S hadows dance wildly as warm kisses are spun
S oft whispers travel South and then North again
I rresisitible visions of naked flesh
O iled down by intimacy's perspiration
N ails leaving a trail of pleasure nice and fresh
S ensual moans raging in anticipation
P rizms of color reflect nice in your eyes
R evealing the commitment between lovers
O ne kiss to seal fate, two more in soft replies
M issions accomplished when a love discovers
I ntimate moments shared 'tween two souls who loved
S atisifies the desires of a beloved
E ternity is loves embrace, sealed by fates wedding band
Author notes
I love acronyms!! So for this contest, I want you write me something using your real name, or AP name, or a word describing yourself as an acronym for a poem.
I am Passionspromise,
I made the promise to fulfill the passion that is missing...
in either mine or someone elses life.
True love must have love & passion to
fulfill the promise of a journey as one.
End of story..two things
Passion
&
Promise
DEFINITIONS TO FORMS USED:
Acrostic: Using the first letter of a name or phrase as the starting point for the poem..
Such as in bold read straight down spells: Passions Promise
Sonnet:
Sonnet
A Sonnet is a poem consisting of 14 lines (iambic pentameter) with a particular rhyming scheme:
Examples of a rhyming scheme:
#1) abab cdcd efef gg
#2) abba cddc effe gg
#3) abba abba cdcd cd
A Shakespearean (English) sonnet has three quatrains and a couplet, and rhymes abab cdcd efef gg.
An Italian sonnet is composed of an octave, rhyming abbaabba, and a sestet, rhyming
cdecde or cdcdcd, or in some variant pattern, but with no closing couplet.
Usually, English and Italian Sonnets have 10 syllables per line, but Italian Sonnets can also have
11 syllables per line.
Senyru:
Senryu
Most popular definition, but there is more to senryu than meets the eye:
Senryu (also called human haiku) is an unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three unrhymed
lines of five, seven, and five syllables (5, 7, 5) or 17 syllables in all. Senryu is usually written in
the present tense and only references to some aspect of human nature or emotions. They possess
no references to the natural world and thus stand out from nature/seasonal haiku.
The 5/7/5 rule was made up for school children to understand and learn this type of poetry.
For an in depth description of Haiku, please visit the Shadow Poetry Haiku, Senryu,
and Tanka section. There is much more to senryu than the madeup 5/7/5 version.
Mine is at the end in one final line after the couplet of the sonnet
A contest entry
- Acronyms!!! by refinnej.
750 points, ended November 1, 30 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please Comment If You Read
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Great forem JackReed..
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Very well done!! Love your form. My fav. line was "E ternity is loves embrace, sealed by fates wedding band" Best of luck!!
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you know we don't talk that much anymore but i do know one thing, that is you, not quite to a tee but yea, that is you, lol, keep it flowing
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Beautifully and sensually done by the wonder woman of form and sexuality.
Love your writes always honey. The Texas tornado strikes again...I love you... Scott 
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This was not penned, but rather brushed on AP's palette of promises by your sighhhs.
and indeed, love and passion are two critical parts of love's exotic recipe for success, sprinkled-of course- with numerous dabs of honesty and a bushel of commitment.
and as always done with those nice little touches that only you can so masterfully do.
Love ya,
Len
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stunning piece hun love the way you penned your name and the spice in it you gave well done always and good luck hugs Angel♥
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AP's finest acrostician strikes again!
Writing her own username in her inimitable style
Great stuff, what else was I expecting?
Love it
Love
Jeff
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