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Influenza blues - a sobby sonnet.

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Influenza blues.

At present I still have this awful ‘flu.
My Doctor says there’s nothing I can do
but let it run its course and see it through.
“A few more weeks and you should feel like new”..

It goes away but then comes back again
The worst part is this fuzziness of  brain -
a lethargy where everything’s a strain
and one can’t concentrate or think in train.

Perhaps some may have noticed, recently,
I haven’t often visited AP
or commented or posted poetry
for which I hope, my friends will pardon me.

I’m not quite sure which sort of ‘flu I’ve got
but reckon it’s the worst one of the lot!

Hugh Wyles, October 26th.2009.





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I’ve had it now for five whole weeks on end
and soon it’s going to drive me round the bend.
Yes! Five whole weeks! Whoever would have thought it?
At least I'm blest that Edna hasn't caught it !

Of all the ‘flues I’ve had, this is the worst
with coughing, sneezing and a constant thirst.
But I’m aware, through all my misery,
that other folk are far worse off than me.

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  • MargaretG
    October 31

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    Best wishes

    When influenza lays one low
    the world becomes a vale of woe,
    where sunshine cannot pierce a beam
    and weary eyes have lost their gleam.
    Our every grief is like this time,
    when reason can't be made to rhyme,
    except with dark and darker thoughts,
    the "if"s, and "should"s and "better not"s.
    My dear, let's look up through the haze
    and set our minds on better days.


  • Hinemoa silver member
    October 31

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    Dear Babe, Heath and I know how ill you have been, I'm glad the Doctor has put you onto stronger antibiotics and I hope Edna's sore throat doesn't get any worse.

    Get well soon Dear Hugh

    Love Hine and Heath.XOXOXO


  • gaze
    October 27

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    Sorry to hear you still ill
    Hope you feel better soon and send that flu to the moon


  • Maureen silver member
    October 26

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    Dear Hugh,

    Is it possible to get two strains of flu, one right after the other? That might explain why your symptoms are the same even though the original flu should be through and you should be feeling good as new!

    Don't forget Dr. Schulz and his herbal 'shots'
    and his toll-free number
    (1-800-HERB-DOC)
    for a free patient handbook!

    PLEASE GET WELL SOON!!!

    Love and Hugs,
    ♥ Maureen


    • hugh wyles silver member
      October 26
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      Dear Maureen,

      I went to my doctor today,
      he said: "You ARE in a bad way.
      This new antibiotic
      will work like a rocket
      and i'm sure you will soon be OK."

      Then he said "Take this bottle away.
      Two pills now and then one every day."
      There are ten more to take -
      now I can't stay awake
      'coz I feel quite lightheaded and fey.

      Love and hugs, XXX Hugh.


  • pixiestix gold member
    October 26

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    Sorry to hear you are still fighting this monster of a flu bug. Brain fog is no fun but even writing under duress you rhyme and rhythm supass the best.

    Sending tons of pixie dust your way for speedy healing and lots of good thoughts too.


  • EyeRaven
    October 26

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    speedy recovery

    It's as enjoyable as it is fun to read this structured easy flowing poem
    seems like everyone is at wonder from this new dilemma of nature
    and if one is a poet one must write i say.

    You sir have made a fine entry to the topic.
    with due respect


  • Pattiboo silver member
    October 26

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    As you said it is a blessing that Edna your wife has so far escaped it let us pray she continues to do so. Your brain may be fuzzy but when it comes to poetry you still write
    exceedingly good verse, and yes you have been missed here on AP.

    Five weeks of feeling so awful must drain all motivation and inspiration so I do hope that you can shake it off once and for all and soon.


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    October 25

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    Dear Hugh---if you are open to natural supplements
    a tiny golden capsule of Oil of Oregano is a killer
    for all sorts of viruses. Take care, get rest!
    Know that we all love you and wish you a faster recovery
    than you have experienced so far!

  • DeeCrepit gold member
    October 25

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    FIVE weeks!

    Here we have the dreaded flu
    and on the week-end a preteen
    died in hospital. Likely you
    are immune to the nasty, seen

    --or so I'm told, only among
    patients who are very young.
    But thus you are allowed to be
    IMpatient as you like, like me.

    It seems a blessing being old
    I'm calling mine just a cold.
    Sleep a lot, with Kleenex kept
    with me for company as I slept.
    My son will tell me if I snore
    as I stretch to sleep some more.

    But FIVE weeks! Please NO! You
    still write presentable verse;
    I can attempt at least to do
    as much. Yawnnn! shiver, nurse
    this aberration to Timbuktoo!

    Get thee well, this is too rough
    I'm sure you've suffered enough!

    Terry

  • Purrsanthema
    October 25

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    Dear Hugh, it's true, 'twixt you and me
    I wish that flu would turn and flee.


  • catz Moderators member
    October 25

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    Your bout with the flu sounds quite awful, Hugh I pray you'll be well soon. But at least you can still let out a good rhyme, so I think you'll live
    Love and
    Dee


  • angelica silver member
    October 25

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    Get well soon Hugh

    Dear Hugh,
    it's awful when one gets the dreaded flu
    and you don't know what you can do!
    The awful runny nose that you can't stop
    it will surely keep you on the hop.
    A hot toddy may be the cure to do the trick
    and don't drink too much or you'll be sick.
    Although we know some folks are worse off
    it doesn't help when all you do is sneeze and cough
    and your brain feels as though it's fried
    and you wish that you'd curled up and died
    and mind is dull no thoughts come through
    I hope you get better soon, dear Hugh.
    And write the poems I love to read so much
    so let Edna help you get well with her gentle touch.

    I know the feeling as since my OP everything has gone wrong
    and now to top it off I had an allergic reaction to the perm solution
    since last Thursday that has left me looking like a white poodle.
    My Hairdresser couldn't set and dry it as I had to rush to the Doctors
    and hopefully it will be done before I go out on Wednesday
    or else some funny stares I'll get from all the Bingo ladies.

    Love and hugs Bea





  • Yemassee gold member
    October 25

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    A five week flu? Never heard of it lasting so long. Egads, I'm sorry Hugh. I hope you get better soon. You are a better man than I am. When I am sick, I am convinced that no one is more ill than I am.

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