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~I Surrender~

Within my heart
A song breaks free
And then I sigh

A kiss or two
Is all I need
To fill me full

My body aches
For want of you
In lustful ways

My heart beats fast
Your touch ignites
A flame so hot

I feel your love
And that is why
I surrender




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  • sgking123 gold member
    November 16

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    wow

    song breaking and admisision that kiss is a begi to a mre lustfulventure is what makes this poem an honest statement..I lved it so much keep the ink flowing poet......and thanks for sharing

  • I thought

    this was really good as i read your words i could feel the passion that went into this short piece it has such great flow. I love to read your poems there always so full of passion. There better then reading a romanice novle,

    sincerly, your poeit
    friend angel


  • melphleg gold member
    October 25
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    Passionate and sensual. I understand the longing.