I try to avoid your eyes
and the look that they bring
but i am drawn to your side
every time i try to leave.
Your touch is burnin' me up inside
but you can't console me to save your life.
Is it too much to ask for
your arms as my harbor?
You've brought upon this feeling
that i don't know how to deal with
yet.
It's your fault I'm in this predicament.
I can't spend a day
without thinkin'
about those nights you stayed.
Is it too difficult
to finish this project?
Or will i just sit on your shelf
waiting for a day you'll dedicate yourself...
Don't leave me in these webs of thoughts,
sitting in this solace.
I'll have nothing to do but rot
and i don't have that kind of tolerance
to waste these feelings on your neglection
if you don't return the affection.
Then i am not sorry to say
I have to go.
I can't play this game
with you anymore.
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A contest entry
- Let your emotions out. by brittany.geeze.
700 points, ended November 20, 20 entries
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Comments
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Your piece is really good got something really special and talented here. I enjoyed reading it very much. I think it has powerful words that touch the soul good work
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Your rhyme is exquisite and precise. I'll look to your work in the future when I try to rhyme =) Great job!
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