Did you bring my Marlboros Lights?
(Now let this fantasy of mine begin)
Just open that door and strut right in.
(Push me on the bed and pin me down)
Dont just climb on top like a clown!
(Grip my arms overhead and kiss my neck)
Dont just give me lifeless little pecks!
(Cause my eyes to roll back into my head)
Dont just jut in and out instead!
(Thrust deep inside and make me scream)
Dont just treat me like one of your wet dreams!
(Pound me from behind and grab my boob)
Dont just leave me dry so that you need lube.
(Let me ride you hard so our passions are rife)
Dont let frustration become my nightly life.
(Make me gasp all night and sweat like the sun)
Don't you dare tell me that you're gonna cum!
(Remind me forever of how you dug deep)
Don't just turn over and fall asleep!
(Make tonight the night when I'm fulfilled)
Don't let it be a bore, your usual drill.
Can you hand me a Marlboro Light?
Author notes
For all the women who are unfulfilled or sexually frustrated, and for whom the only joy of sex is that cheeky cigarette once its over...not all guys are ignorant to your suffering :-)
A contest entry
- ♥Sensual Fantasies (18+ :P)♥ by zee91190.
800 points, ended November 12, 62 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
My second poem writing from a woman's perpective....let me know what you think
Comments
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Sex can be frustrating sometimes for me as well. but damn that cigerette afterwards is awesome . Great write here friend. I enjoyed reading it very much.
Loretta
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haha, isnt it just
thanks for reading, i really appreciate it
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This was fun to read. I loved the line "Dont let frustration become my nightly life". So many women have this problem. The guy will not take time to learn what makes them tick. Good luck in the contest SH
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*rofl* *rofl* *rofl* *rofl* *rofl*
Omg! I loved this!! Its so funny and accurate. Dont get me wrong, I am quite satisfied sexually. But its just that we women are doomed with that extra notch of sex drive that lets us go on to multiple orgasms in a very short span of time. Its quite frustrating when you are just a little away from your next orgasm and he says" Am gonna cum!" and boom! The end of the night. AAAAARGH!!
"Make me gasp all night and sweat like the sun
Don't you dare tell me that you're gonna cum!" this line just says it all!!
The flow, the rhyme were slippery smooth. And as a bonus its got that little bit of a dominatrix side to it
Absolutely loved it. You really are very talented.
Thanks for entering
All the best
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Lol You know, i have been scolded for that frustration women feel before and it has not been a pleasant night after that lol....its nice that you're sexually satisfied, i have learnt that nothing is more irritating to women than losing out at the last moment I'm glad you liked it, and thank you so much for reading, and for your wonderful comment...i am touched by your words
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hahaha! wow, this is awesome! hmmm, frustrations, very graphically depicted in this piece, I like the way this kind of made me laugh and at the same time gets some vital information drilled into a guys head, maybe i should show this to my guy, haha
"(Make me gasp all night and sweat like the sun)
Don't you dare tell me that you're gonna cum"
i loved this part! that's something i could relate to! anyway glad that you seem to be getting into the mind of a woman very accurately, well done!
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Haha, i only managed to get into the mind of a woman this well through first-hand experiences and frustrations, the consequences of which i often brought on myself lol (a long, long time ago obviously hehe) But i'm glad you could relate to it, and please feel free to show ur guy (or any guy for that matter lol) Thank you for your wonderful comment, i really appreciate it, though i think i'm out of female-perspective material now, at least for a while lol.
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♥OMG!!♥
♥that poem was the icing on the cake. i think you captured that magical time that every woman wants from her man (or a man in general lol). the only other person i know that could describe it as well would have to be walt disney because he is a whiz when it comes to expressing the mind. this poem is well written and i'm glad i took the time to read it
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Hahaha, thank you! A comparison to walt disney has definitely made my day thank you so much for reading, i'm really glad u enjoyed it and found it relatable...i can imagine that if u want a special time together with a man, there really is nothing worse than him being bad in bed!
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since this poem is pretty much rhyme, i find it out with the begining and end..but that is your point you know? but its a good poem..and i laughed. thought it was funny, good luck and take care
Stephanie ♥
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Phew get me a fan!!!! bloody brilliant and I'm right with you ! and I smoke Marlboro Lights !
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hehehe, thank you there nothing like a cheeky smoke after is there lol
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Absolutely!
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