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Elusive ... it does happen!




Where are you... oh creative mind,
don't leave your thoughts for someone else to find.

Gazing into the distance I wonder why,
nothing comes through elusive vision in my eye.

If I pensive be for long enough in kind,
hopefully, it will come, what I'm trying so hard to find.

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  • Nelak
    January 9

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    Oh where oh where can it be?

    Katie,
    Oh where oh where has our little creative minds gone, oh where oh where can they be? I know the feeling... I'm slowly beginning to write again. It's been at least 2 years since I have really written anything. This has been happening to a lot of people, I've noticed. Perhaps this is the year to get back into the groove! I really hope so because I loved writing and reading poetry. The creative minds... come back!!
    I hope all has been well with you! Happy new year!!! Thinking of you lots and sending my love.
    -Kalen


  • deercatcher
    December 22, 2009
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    Do you like this?


  • deercatcher
    December 22, 2009
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    I wrote a poem called "Barren" about not being able to write, I essentially wrote no poems for two years. Then it; and off we go...


  • paullallady silver member
    October 26, 2009

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    for over a year I have asked my creative mind where it has gone, for my muse has definately relocated to a better climate I think, anyways, I really did enjoy and relate to this poem and it caught a mood that I fully understand. great job on this one.


    • wishintreeUK
      November 4, 2009
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      Thank you for taking the time to read and comment, I do appreciate it.

      Katie

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