Space and time don't exist here
Under the milky way tonight. When I wished upon that
Star, my blind faith lead me to a
Place in the here and now where no one
Else exists; where we could love freely, and
No one could ever bring us apart; because
Darling, I fall in love with you
Every time you breathe. I
Don't care that we're both the same externally, but
Internally, our hearts beat as one, and I'll
Never let you go. You utterly complete me. So
Tonight, when we are finally together in slumber, remember that
I love you, and you are
Mine,
Eternally.
Author notes
Forbidden love...
A contest entry
- *~* PREWRITES CONTEST*~* by tidoubleguher.
750 points, ends December 6, 230 entries
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Comments
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This is great! I love how you layed it out too!
I wish I could pick a fave line but it's all so amazing and I can definately relate to this
Kudos, 5/5
Keep writing !!
xx
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this is sweet
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This is absolutely beautiful. Forbidden love is always the best to write about, at least that's how I feel. Wonderful job with this piece, thank you so much for entering.
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