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The Musician





Farther than a child's dream
Away on wings of flying fish
Traveled, has his song, to me
Happily, like a birthday wish
Escaped my heart, my dad has not
Remaining loved, eternally






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  • Catie Sheeran
    October 26

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    This is beautiful "away on wings of flying fish" <--I love the imagery. but my favorite line is "farther than a child's dream" ...this is a lovely dedication for your father. A pleasure to read from you again...it's been almost a year, you know!



    • eltortedequeso
      October 26
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      Thanks lady! I realized that too when I started writing that it was close to a year, I was even planning a "comeback" poem before this one. Haha, but thank you again and its good to hear from you