You don't have a soul 'til you fall in love,
for the one you fall in love with IS your sole.
A contest entry
- The Concept of Soul by Sweet Water.
1500 points, ended November 14, 26 entries
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I have a question for the poet:
When you emphasize "IS" and spell soul as "sole," are you crafting a metaphor about falling on your feet, or was that just unintentional? -
Im sorry but i dont agree.
Youre saying that people who arent in love dont have a soul ?
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Yeah I was thinking the same exact thing haha
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Okay I'm gonna be honest and say I really don't like this poem.
Nevertheless, thanks for entering. -
I think its a nice idea. I'm left wanting more - perhaps if you had spread it out onto four lines instead of two. Just a thought.
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you spelled soul wrong
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