It is raining in the city,dreaming rain ,
It is clean and cold and lovely,
Silver rain.
All the busy city people love it so...
They gaze out of their windows ...
As the raindrops hit below .
All the city smiles in pleasure at the sight,
It is raining in the city ,
Silver night .
The lights all twinkle brightly ...
City lights.
The rain will make them dazzle ...
Twice as bright.
Wet and windy wonder...
Rain so sweet.
Wild city raindrops ,
At your feet .
Lovers underneath umbrellas ,
Kiss and run .
Hide beside a building ,
Rainy fun .
Oh the city rain is sweeter than a kiss.
Everyone comes out to see ,
A sight that can't be missed.
It is raining in the city ,
Streamimg love .
Let's all walk in the silver
From above...
A contest entry
- Show me anything by pain is love..
420 points, ended November 30, 11 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anything and everything by bunnyslasher157.
900 points, ended November 11, 97 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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So first of this is such a refreshing poem. You truly showed me what the rain felt like. Love and silver and much more hidden within the depths of your words. I love the flow of this piece and I love too the feeling that acompanies it. You really did show me which is something people have struggled with in this contest. I really liked the silver rain and the lines
They gaze out of their windows ...
As the raindrops hit below .
All the city smiles in pleasure at the sight,
It is raining in the city ,
Silver night .
Silver night wow I can really see the city the rain and feel the love. Thank you for entering my contest
Pain is love.
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Thank-you for gold..I am thrilled to receive it ...and also,I am delighted my poem made you feel,see..whatever emotion ..it is what I intended.
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Beautifuly Written
i loved it.
"Oh the city rain is sweeter than a kiss.
Everyone comes out to see ,
A sight that can't be missed."
my favorite part. -
This was a very beautifully written piece of work you have written here. This was very enjoyable too read. Had a good flow too it as well. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for the read. Good luck too you in the contest and keep up the good work.
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