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Faith

God does what he says he's going to do
The only one to doubt is you
He keeps his promises no matter how small
Though your grip is slipping, he will never let you fall
In his own time God will work
He cleanses the sinner and lightens the dark
Though hope seems bleak and doubts are soaring
Joy and peace will come in the morning

Keep the faith, keep the hope, lose the heartache
Wash away guilty feelings for your own sake
God's already forgiven every mistake
And a new person in you God has made

"We are forgiven!" the guilty cry
"Christ is Risen!" and unity is tied
We are one with God the Son
He'll carry us back no matter how far we run

The night is dark, cruel, gloomy, and quiet
But the enemies in my heart are stirring and fighting
I shout out loud for help in Jesus Christ
He comes to my rescue and his love with suffice

Keep the faith, keep the hope, lose the falling tears
God is by you and hears all your consuming fears
He's here right now to hold your broken heart
He'll fulfill all your needs and place the unfixable back apart

Though hope seems bleak and doubts are soaring
Joy and peace will come in the morning

Have faith

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  • DefinitiveFreak silver member
    2 days ago
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    Ach, I left a comment here but it didn't register. Boo. Anyway, I tried to say that I feel like He is in fact holding my broken heart. And this is a poem I would have liked to have written myself, but never had the courage. Thank you for entering this poem in my contest and giving me the opportunity to read it.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 27
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    wonderful poem...I will be back to comment...


  • Gulfbreeze
    November 24
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    Your poetry is proof you are a child of God and he is watching over you. Awesome piece here, something to be very proud of.


  • M0ofi3
    November 22
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    OMG! I So Appreciate This!

    I'm weeping tears of faith. I am the one saying, "I believe, Lord. Help me in my unbelief!" *weep*

    There those who will read this and love its truth, even if wincing.

    Hmmm...how do I know that?

    I'm inspired to put my PW in this contest on a similar subject.

    I'm M0ofi3! "M" stands for me. "0" (zero) for who I am w/o Jesus. The "3" is the Trinity, always closely following me...


  • lovlilmystery
    November 12
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    Simply beautiful, poem about God. Thank you, for entering my contest. Take care and have a great day.

    Sandi


  • MoonlitRoses
    November 8

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    "Though hope seems bleak and doubts are soaring
    Joy and peace will come in the morning"

    Those are such strong words! This poem is not only amazingly written, but it is written with so much truth, passion, and faith! An amazing piece that I very much enjoyed reading.

    Thank you for entering, and good luck!


  • Arkbear gold member
    November 7

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    From the very first few Lines, you captured my attention.....lots to think about there -

     

    There are truly enemies in the heart.....just because Jesus lives there, does not mean we are not at risk for fighting in spiritual battles along the way of our Christian walk......very good write.....good luck and God bless for entering,

     

    Bear -

  • This is an amazing piece, one that has left me with the biggest smile. Thank you so much for entering my contest!!!


  • Michael H.
    November 3
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    I really liked this poem. God really does keep His promises.


  • HyperSoccergal8
    November 3
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    great write, very strong, thank you for entering my contest and good luck =]


  • Sector-Hunter silver member
    November 3

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    This is so true and strong. Everyone needs to hold on to faith when times get hard. I know right now you need to stay strong with what you have been through. Love you girl stay strong SH

  • I love it. ^_^


  • Iron Saint
    October 29

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    Very Good

    I love your faith little Sister please check out my poem entitled "Faith" it is on my page. God bless you and keep you. Love James


  • Indeed
    October 27
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  • savemysoul
    October 26
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    great poem jenny


  • mgmc gold member
    October 26

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    This is very nicely written Jenny! Faith and hope can keep us going through the worst.
    This is a great poem to read and I hope the writing of it was helpful also!

  • mcheadle
    October 26
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    There are day when one needs to hear words like these just to keep on going.

    You may never know how many you have helped in a day. I can say at least one today...mac thank-You for the reminder.

  • goalsv
    October 26

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    Beautiful, a great piece that shows strength in faith that God is there no matter the situation. Nice flow with a perfect form.

  • This is Awesome!

    "Though hope seems bleak and doubts are soaring
    Joy and peace will come in the morning"

    So Very Well Said!

    ya All-Ways, ~ Jan ~


  • glenn shannon silver member
    October 25

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    faith is a must to get thru life and youve penned it all so well here God is love and love is life bless you sweet one keep up the brilliant work uncle glenn


  • fallendust
    October 25

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    You are a very good writter! Impressive indeed! You have earned alot of trophies and now I can see why! You are very talented. How is your day?!
    Sincerely,
    Sarah


  • The Drifter
    October 25

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    Whoa, such a well written poem full of GOD's powerful message to us all. All we have to do is accept, open up to HIM and let HIM in. Confess with our mouth, read his WORD and step out in faith. Yes, you have it perfectly set in your poem.
    Thank you for sharing you truthful poem of hope in CHRIST.


  • FreeFalling911
    October 25

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    Within the last 2 months I have seen my life get completely destroyed.
    The lord has never been there until now.
    This poem has spoken light into my life.
    Thank you.


  • Spike McCloud
    October 25
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    Very nice. I like it. I could those words right now. ^^

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