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Special K!

Morning hunger begins to mumble
I hear my round belly grumble
I toss and turn 'till I can't handle
"Grumb""Grumb""Grumb!!!"

I walk to the kitchen to look
But there's nothing else to cook!!!
I feel my belly shook
"Crock""Crock"Crock"

I kick and push the cupboard
And I hear the cans clattered
I see cans roll and scattered
"Clared"Clared"Clared"

I turn to look at a pink box
The Special K cereal rock!
I hear and feel my belly talk
"Ooock", "Oocck", "Ooock"

I savor the Special K's grainy flavor
And the vigor of the berry ardor
It leaves my belly a lot better
Now I'm ready to flatter

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  • Lunar Poet
    November 9
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    hi


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    October 26

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    lol
    yummy poem
    SpEcIaL K RoCks
    I'd starve without it
    nice ryhme and I like the
    little chrunchy imagery
    Wish you the best in the contest
    David


  • whyspr gold member
    October 25
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    MMMM Special K is yummy. Which surprised me because I really prefer sweet stuff, lol. Good poem


  • Stickboy gold member
    October 25
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    lol i know that feeling lol best of luck in the contest, thanks for the smile
    Sean