Floating fears inevitably realised:
bathe myelf in acid to ease
the pain you created.
Incredibly smooth surface,
you sting again and again.
Just leave the acid tap running.
Author notes
prompt: wasp
A contest entry
- Semi-Quickie #3 (give me thought) by iamlost.
800 points, ended November 16, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I really like the abstract feel of this piece, and how you made every line count. The imagery helps this stand out as well.
Thanks for your entry,
~lost
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thoughts awash in such simple strong lines
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